Asked by Carson Short on May 26, 2024
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The following sentences form an essay. Proofread them for consistency, parallelism, and concise language. Select the letter of the error in each sentence. In general, though, soap was sought after and many people wanted to get it.
A) consistency
B) parallelism
C) concise language
Concise Language
The use of few words without sacrificing clarity to convey a message effectively.
- Amplify brevity in writing by omitting redundant and needless expressions.
Verified Answer
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Dr. MELESSE AsfawMay 26, 2024
Final Answer :
C
Explanation :
The sentence could be made more concise by removing redundant elements, such as "though" or rephrasing to eliminate the repetition of "wanted" and "sought after," which convey similar meanings.
Learning Objectives
- Amplify brevity in writing by omitting redundant and needless expressions.